Criterion D – Evaluate
Instructions
Comparing the quality of the product with the original design specification.
1 Was my product able to meet the aim I established in my design brief? If yes why? If not why not?
My product was able to meet the aim of the design brief, because I think that if you see this picture somewhere, your eye will automatically go to the writing because of the bright color. When they read the “Are You a Fashion Victim?” sign, they will wonder why a poster would say this, and they will be able to see why I’m saying this. I think that it really portrays what I wanted to state, because I just don’t want girls and women thinking that they need to be like these girls just because they appear in a magazine or in a Dior fashion show. I just want people to see it and realize that not everything in the world revolves around pretty women and trying to be like them, because as a fact the women who work at Dior and in magazines are not that pretty really as we can clearly see when we see the model. So I think that it really portrays what I wanted people to see in the project.
2. Which are the areas that require improvement?
I think that some areas that could require improvements are the final hard copy of the product. I had a couple of problems when I was doing it, firstly because when I was going to print it in a big printer, I didn’t know where to take it, and then I left for Lagunazo, so that was an issue. Afterwards I decided I was going to print it in a normal printer and yesterday when I was printing it, the power in the whole school went off, so the printing was almost done, but the picture got a little cut off, so it doesn’t look as nice, as if it had been the whole picture. I also think that it could have been better; I hadn’t folded the paper, because the picture and the piece of cardboard I am using got a little crumpled up, because I folded it. So next time I do something that requires a cardboard I’m not going to fold it, so the same thing doesn’t happen to me again.
3. Do you have any changes or deviations from the original design? Explain and justify.
From the original design, I changed a couple of things. Firstly I changed the size of the writing, because it wasn’t working when I used it, the size of the letter I used for the final one is about 100 and 200, because when I was doing it I realized that there needed to be big letters so people would read that first and then realized that I needed to change the style of the design. With the font size change, also came the change in something that came with the design. I decided that the letters couldn’t be inside the dress of the girl, because it would lose itself inside it and people wouldn’t notice it, meaning that the whole point of the project wouldn’t be showing. So I decided that the letters should be outside in a bold color that would catch people’s eye when they pass by and the first thing that they would see is the letters, then read it and finally look at the picture in order to see why I was saying that.
Evaluating efficiency of the planning process.
1. Did everything work as I planned it, if not what went wrong?
At first I had planned my project to be very different from what the final project was. At first I did various designs, but I didn’t like them. So then I got the idea of one single picture with writing in it. After that the project went smoothly, and I was able to do it with no problems afterwards. I think that the biggest problem by doing the final thing was the fact that the printer shut down and the picture got cut off, so it was really frustrating and then the paper go crumpled up. But my mom took me that weekend to print it in a big printer so everything is good.
Evaluating the social significance of the product.
1. Do you think that your presentation is useful for the student community?
I don’t know if the presentation is useful for the community, because I don’t know if some people would get the meaning. Other people will get the message and the meaning of the project. I think that if you know what song I chose will get the message im trying to communicate. So in general I don’t think that the product is really useful, but it does leave a message to people.
2. Friend’s opinion, you need to have 2 names and their opinions.
Rafaela: Sofia is a very intelligent person. Her final product was very good and interesting. Like in all of her projects, she putted effort to outstand from the rest with her creativity. The product had a meaning and it was easy for anyone to understand. The typography used was interesting and showed a message. It also related to the picture. At the end we could see that she explained how typography communicates meaning in our everyday life throw writing. Good Job.
Carlos: Sofia is a truly dedicated student. She is always thinking beyond what it is expected. Her product was truly amazing, how she incorporated a very catchy typography and also a picture that attracted a girl’s attention. I think that the message she tried to deliver was shown without exception. She did a good job during her presentation by explaining how it was. I believe that she is truly talented in advertisement and she should develop it more and more. Who knows? Maybe she can become a great advertiser! Good work, worthy of a 7.